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05 November 2006 @ 03:47 am
Nanoisms #1, 2006  
So today I have had my first MOST FANTASTIC quote. In a scene meant to be tense and scary, I have succeeded in making it seem as though fellatio is occuring. I am doooooomed. Why won't the MC's flirt? Why is the king obsessed with the Baron? Why does Jason only have good lines when he's insulting Ardren?

Today's quote from my current novel:
The Baron bent double, making what should have been a courtly bow look like the motion of a man forced before an executioner practicing beheading. Jason looked down at him, that wicked, cold, smile still on his lips, then laid his hand lightly on the back of Ardren's head.

DOOOOOOM.

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